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Wise Blood

9/30/2014

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Title: Wise Blood

Author: Flannery O'Connor

Publication Date: 1952

How I Heard About It: Oh, it's not very obscure at all

            One summer not too long ago, at the Sewanee Writers’ Conference, I was tasked with driving the writer Elizabeth Spencer back to the Nashville airport. This wasn’t an unusual job—I’ve been lucky enough over the years to spend that hour-and-a-half ride with many wonderful novelists, poets, editors, agents, and the like—but I remember being particularly nervous about this one. She’d just received a rare standing ovation after her conference reading, and she was, to be quite honest, very very old,[1] with heavy purplish eye shadow and a voice like my grandmother’s.

            Those trips force you to find common ground (notable exception: the poet C.K. Williams, who asked me not to bother him while he read his newspaper), and I thought: Well, here is a female Southern writer who’s written nine novels and who’s dined with Faulkner in Paris, so surely she must be a fan of Flannery O’Connor.

            “Oh, God, no,” she said. “How can anyone stand those ho-rr-ib-le stories?”

            Hmm. I changed the subject. Tell me about meeting Faulkner again?

            But I’ve since wondered: Was Spencer’s exception stylistic? Probably not. Was it because, as I’ve sometimes felt, that O’Connor’s stories are too symbolically Christian? Doubtful. Was it because of those grotesque, freakish characters? Likely.  

            I came to Flannery O’Connor’s stories relatively early in high school and college, but I came late, here in my thirties, to her first novel, Wise Blood. I’m glad I did, for I doubt I would have made much of it earlier. The plot, for one, is nearly impossible to summarize. (When my wife asked me what I’d just read, I fumbled for the right answer and ordered on iTunes the John Huston film, an incredibly faithful adaptation, halfway through which my wife went upstairs to take a bath).

            The protagonist is an earnest young man named Hazel Motes (played spot-on in the movie by Brad Dourif, later of Chucky fame) who starts preaching about The Church of Christ Without Christ. But then there’s also this boy named Enoch Emory, a gatekeeper at the zoo, who’s obsessed with a “shrunken man” in a glass case, and who ends up stalking the city in a gorilla costume by the end of the book. Oh, and preacher who fakes being blind, and his daughter named Sabbath Hawks, who falls in love with Haze.

            One of the blurbs on the back cover of the renewed 1990 FSG edition is from Caroline Gordon: “Her picture of the word is literally terrifying. Kafka is almost the only one of our contemporaries who has achieved such effects.”

            I thought about that comparison often while I was reading Wise Blood, and if and how it made sense to me. Foremost is the idea that our goals are never obtained and our actions rarely make sense.

            But you have to contrast that idea with how others read this book, and many of O’Connor’s stories: as a Christian allegory. Consider what Margaret Early Whitt has to say in Understanding Flannery O’Connor: “the novel is the story of Haze’s rejection of the Christ who died on the cross, and his eventual return to this Christian belief.”

            I’m not spoiling the plot (partly because plot is secondary in this novel, owing to the fact, I think, that she “stitched” together a few of her stories) to report that Haze ends up blinding himself and, shortly afterwards, getting clubbed to death by a policeman. Whitt sees in this a number of Biblical allusions, including Paul and Jonah and Hazael, but I also think of King Lear, blind in the rain at the end of the play (and in the book: “That night a driving icy rain came up…”)

            I don’t doubt that O’Connor wrote this with a Christian polemic in mind, but I don’t take a Christian message away from the book. In fact, the most powerful religious moments, to my mind, are when Motes is preaching his new faith—an almost Gospel of Thomas-like idea of a “new jesus” (lower caps = O’Connor’s) stripped of the miracles: “there was no Fall because there was nothing to fall from and no redemption because there wasn’t the first two. Nothing matters but that Jesus was a liar.”

            He gets one pseudo-follower, a boy who just wants to go to a whorehouse, and then a loquacious man named Holy Jay Oney arrives on the scene and starts testifying for Motes—all in the aim to get money from the crowd. Indeed, O’Connor is constantly exploring the tension between economic and religious motivation, but one never senses that Motes cares about money (even though, or perhaps because, he has an army pension).

            All of this is fine and well for literary critics and students to ponder over, but as a writer I am really just drawn to her sentences, the descriptions of her minor characters, and the weird world she creates to put them in.

            No writer is better at describing a minor character, and often the description is simple—two juxtaposing elements. Consider all of these characters who make such brief appearances: “the flat of her face, reddish under fox-colored hair” (passenger on train); “she had on a pink nightgown that would better have fit a smaller figure” (Mrs. Watts, a whore); “The man had on a small canvas hat and a shirt patterned with bunches of upside-down pheasants and quail and bronze turkeys” (a potato-peeler salesman); “a jutting shale-textured face and a toothpick in his mouth” (a second-shift guard); and so and so on.

            It is a strange world indeed, and one with which Hazel Motes does become disgusted. But as a reader I am very much attracted to this strangeness, these ho-rr-i-ble stories, almost as though my “wise blood,” in the same dissociative way as Enoch Emery’s, draws me forward, even if in this blog review I cannot articulate everything: “what it couldn’t say was inside him, a terrible knowledge without any words to it, a terrible knowledge like a big nerve growing inside him.”

           

           

             


[1] In southern gentlemanly fashion, I won’t give away her age except to say that she was born in 1921.

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Billy Watson's Croker Sack

4/20/2014

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Title: Billy Watson's Croker Sack

Author: Franklin Burroughs

Publication Date: 1991

How I Heard About It: LIterary Osmosis

“I very much fear,” Franklin Burroughs writes at the end of his last (and title) essay in Billy Watson’s Croker Sack, “that writing about such a place will come out sounding like ‘local color.’ …[But] I’m sure my writing won’t consistently escape these evasions of the complexities of the particular place, or of the self that looks at it. But the croker sack has quite unexpectedly turned out to be an emblem of what I would hope to find and how I would hope to find it.”

What we find in these six essays, as if opening a croker sack[1], epitomizes the very best of (pardon the term) nature writing—the insightful and complex intersections between human and natural history, the precision of language and image. The places that Burroughs writes about in Billy Watson’s Croker Sack are either the Maine of his adult life or the South Carolina low country of his youth, more often the connection between the two.

So if it’s local color, I like local color, and damn those who don’t. In fact, it’s no secret that I’ve always admired and envied Burroughs, if not felt a kind of kinship with him. We both were born in South Carolina, both graduated as English majors from Sewanee. During my Maymester kayaking and writing course, I taught his book The River Home, which chronicles his canoe trip down the Waccamaw River in the wake of a writer named Nathaniel Holmes Bishop, who made a remarkable 2500 miles journey in a paper canoe from Quebec to the Gulf of Mexico from 1874-1875, and who wrote about it in a book (an obscure one!) called The Voyage of the Paper Canoe.

And, indeed, Burroughs’ prose has an ease to it that can only be described in the metaphorical terms of a river—an ability to flow effortlessly between the personal, the political , the scientific, the historical, the journalistic, the ethical, the philosophical, the etymological, and so forth.[2]

Take, for instance, the first essay in the collection, “A Snapping Turtle in June,” in which Burroughs finds a snapping turtle digging a hole on a road in Maine. The discovery leads him, as writer, into marvelous description:

The shell and skin are a muddy gray; the eye, too, is of a murky mud color. The pupil is black and shaped like a star or a spoked wheel. Within the eye there is a strange yellowish glint, as though you were looking down into turbid water and seeing, in the depths of the water, like light from a smoldering fire. It is one of Nature’s more nightmarish eyes…The snapper’s eye is dull, like a pig’s, but inside it there is this savage malevolence, something suggesting not only an evil intention towards the worlds, but the torment of an inner affliction.

I did not intend, when copying that just now, to quote that much of the text. But each sentence, as you will note, surged with a new intensity.[3]

The literary father here, of course, is Thoreau. One cannot think of a New England nature essayist, even a South Carolina transplant, without thinking of Thoreau, who, more than Emerson, wrote essays that moved so easily between narrative and meditation.

But back to snapping turtles.

It’s not just description that carries this essay—it’s also the fact that Burroughs is a meticulous researcher. And he can relate his research to the non-scientific reader: “The fish they catch by luring them into range with their vermiform tongues, which may have something to do with the role of trickster that they assume in the mythology of North American Indians.”

And then Burroughs will step back and narrate the story of showing the turtle to his young daughters and of carrying the hissing turtle from road to ditch. And then, as though reaching farther down into the croker sack, he’ll pull out the real story—a flashback to his boyhood in Conway, a summer in which he works for a timber company with his two cousins[4].

It’s in this memory that something terrible and strange happens when a drunk—sitting in a country store where the timber crew is having lunch, and mumbling incoherencies about a man named McNair—suddenly explodes and takes out his rage on a snapping turtle that is something like the store’s houseguest:

The turtle seemed weary, deflated, too long out of water. The man nudged its head with his boot, and the turtle hissed and struck feebly toward him. The man glared down at it, letting his rage recover and build back in him. He looked like a diver, gathering to plunge. The turtle’s mouth hung open, when it hissed again the man’s arm suddenly jerked down with the pistol and he shot it, shattering the turtle’s head. ‘That’s what I’d do to that goddamned McNair.’

Burroughs doesn’t end the essay there. He returns, of course, to his daughters, who are made more innocent in contrast with the violent memory. But the episode haunts the reader in a way that it must haunt Burroughs himself, and one sees the very fluid connection between Nature and Human.  

I won’t spoil the rest of the essays as I might have here. But it’s fair to say that Burroughs treats the rest of his subjects—moose, fishing, dogs, duck hunting, the croker sack itself—with the same range of complexity and beauty as he does the snapping turtle.

            There is, perhaps, a limited readership for a book like this, but I am in it. My interest is partly local, partly personal, but mostly because of the gorgeous writing, both on the sentence and thematic level, that just flows.

            At the end of “Of Moose and Moose Hunter,” Burroughs has a kind of flash forward to a moment that hasn’t happened yet, but will, when he sees a moose while fly-fishing, and how he describes it might be exactly how one feels about reading this book:

            And I would look up from the water, almost dizzy with staring for so long at nothing but the tiny fly drifting in the current, and there they would be—maybe a cow and a calf—standing on the other bank, watching me watch them, trying to fathom it.


[1] Burroughs: “In South Carolina the word referred to any biggish cloth sack—for example, the hundred-pound sacks that livestock feed came in.”

[2] Burroughs also has an amazing vocabulary that he employs with ease. In one paragraph alone he uses the following words casually and in a way that doesn't suggest, in my opinion, pretense: frowsy, parataxis, importunity, and furtive.

[3] “The image is Zen,” the poet Charles Wright writes. “The metaphor is Christian.” If so (and I do believe so), in the quoted passage above you’ll notice the Zen-like attention to detail but also the subtle ways in which Burroughs converts images to wonderful metaphors. And that, I think, may be a valid way to describe Burroughs as a writer—he never makes any outright statements of faith, but his writing is imbedded with an intellectual Christianity (a.k.a. Episcopalianism).

[4] Burroughs is also, I might add here, a master of character description: “He was lanky, with comically large feet and big, bony, lightly freckled hands and wrists, and you would have expected him to have no strength and stamina at all. But he could use any of the tools we used—bushaxe or machete or grubbing hoe—with no sign of strain or fatigue, all day long, holding the tool gingerly, a pace that the rest of us could not sustain.”


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Jude the Obscure

3/6/2014

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Title: Jude the Obscure

Author: Thomas Hardy

Publication Date: 1895

How I Heard About It: An old teacher


Thomas Hardy’s last novel, Jude the Obscure, is not, in fact, obscure at all. Rather, many readers find it to be the greatest and bleakest (not to say most controversial) novel that the great master ever wrote. Indeed, it was reviewed so harshly when it came out—many called it Jude the Obscene—that it (thankfully[1]) sent Hardy into writing poetry for the rest of his life.

            So my one reader will have to forgive me that I am reviewing it here for “Resuscitation” only because it has the word “obscure” in the title and because I just recently read it and want to blog about it.

            The novel is not necessarily satirical—at its heart it is a tragic love story—but it is regarded as the most critical novel of the late-Victorian, early-modern age because it attacks English society’s most venerable institutions—the family, the church, and the class system.

            Jude Fawley, we learn early, is like many great characters in fiction—obsessive, nearly monomaniacal. But it’s not a white whale or a beauty named Daisy that Jude is after. No, he wants to be a scholar at Oxford (fictionalized here as Christminster), and he “seemed to see his way to living comfortably in Christminster in the course of a year or two, and knocking at the doors of one of those strongholds of learning of which he had dreamed so much.”

            He has, as every teacher will recognize, the potential for a great student, and he even takes as his role model the former schoolmaster of his provincial town—one Mr. Phillotson, who leaves for Chrisminter and whom Jude imagines as “promenading at ease [there], like one of the forms in Nebuchadnezzar’s furnace.”

            But Christminster remains a pragmatic possibility. He is a poor, orphaned day laborer; and to make matters worse, something happens to him that forever alters the path towards his scholarly dreams.

            He gets hit by a pig’s dick.[2]

            Yes, that’s right. You heard me loud and clear. And I hope the shock of those words in some small way mimics Jude’s sudden reversal of fortune.

            For this pig’s dick has been tossed by a local butcher’s daughter, Arabella Donn, who is sensual enough and cunning enough and randy enough to entrap Jude in a hopeless marriage by faking pregnancy. And Jude being a man of “honor,” which means a man of the times, decides he must do the “honorable thing” and marry her.

            It is a terribly short and contentious affair. And oh if the tale has ended there as a short story condemning early passion! But this brief indictment of marriage—Arabella soon leaves with her family for better prospects in Australia—is just the beginning of a Job-like sequence of torture.

            Indeed, Jude finally moves to Christminster, with the hope of somehow finagling his way into university studies, only to become enslaved again by his passions and fixated on Sue Bridehead, his cousin. But Sue, in one of the many ironic twists of coincidence in the novel, decides to marry Jude’s old schoolteacher, Mr. Phillotson, and torment Jude with her finicky, back-and-forth acceptance and denial of his love.

            Eventually, however, things come to pass. Arabella arrives back on the scene[3] and delivers the news that she and Jude have a son together, a morose little kid nicknamed (over-symbolically) Little Father Time, who is not exactly a character. He is a symbol. And if I believe him to be an artistic mistake[4], I also sort of love his somber questions: “It would be better to be out o’ the world than in it, wouldn’t it?”

            This question occurs, in fact, just before the most pivotal scene in the novel, which I won’t spoil here, but which occurs after Sue and Jude have divorced their former spouses and lived together and raised three children.

            Little Father Time ruins all. It is almost unbearably bleak.

            ~

            The novel is supposed to be Hardy’s most autobiographical, not least for the reason that Jude undertakes a profession of restoring churches.[5] It is also set in a semi-fictionalized Wessex, a blend of actual and imagined locations like Faulkner’s Yoknapatawpha county.

            Indeed, the connection between Hardy and Faulkner—which is more than regionalism—is not lost on me. Both novelists are masters of the scene—chapters, for instance, that read like imbedded short stories.

            One of my favorite scenes in Jude was, not ironically, the only happy scene in the entire novel. Jude and Sue, together with their three children, visit an Agricultural Fair, and the scene capture nicely what Hardy, in a poem entitled “Hap,” calls “Blisses about my pilgrimage as pain.”

            For when the pain does come at the end of the novel, as it surely must, it comes on strong. And one can’t help but contrast it with those fragile moments of happiness earlier in the novel and earlier in the lives of Sue and Jude.

            I was especially moved by the moment in which Jude, pleading with Sue not to leave him, changes his argument on the grounds of self-destruction:

            ‘O Sue,’ said he with a sudden sense of his own danger. ‘Do not do an immoral thing for moral reasons! You have been my social salvation. Stay with me for humanity’s sake! You know what a weak fellow I am. My two Arch Enemies—my weakness for womankind, and my impulse to strong liquor. Don’t abandon me to them, Sue, to save your soul only!”

            But I won’t spoil too much if I tell you this plea doesn’t work. Sue leaves him, and he is left alone to die with Arabella, who has entrapped him again in second marriage, which is even unhappier than the first.

            And upon Jude’s death, as Arabella leaves his corpse unattended in order to visit the throngs of people watching a boat-race, who can’t help but think of those first hopeful visions of Christminster, and how tragic they seem now?

            Some way within the limits of the stretch of landscape, points of light like the topaz gleamed The air increased in transparency with the lapse of minutes, till the topaz points showed themselves to be the vanes, windows, wet roof slates, and other shining spots upon the spires, domes, freestone-work, and varied outlines that were faintly revealed. It was Christminster, unquestionably; either directly seen, or mirage in the peculiar atmosphere.

            The spectator gazed on and on till the windows and vanes lost their shine, going out almost suddenly, like extinguished candles. The vague city became veiled in mist. Turning to the west, he saw that the sun had disappeared. The foreground of the scene had grown funereally dark, and near objects out on the hues and shap
[1] This is not to say that Hardy is not a great novelist. But his supreme triumph is in his poetry.

[2] Dick is not the actual word used. Hardy writes that “a soft cold substance had been flung at him…a piece of flesh, the characteristic part of a barrow-pig, which the countrymen used for greasing their boots”

[3] All of the coincidences in the novel cannot, unfortunately, be chalked up to the smallness of provincial life. I think they are a small flaw in the novel.

[4] Hardy never had kids, which is perhaps why he can’t seem to write believable children characters in this novel.

[5] As it’s been noted before, this is quite an ironic vocation for a non-believer.


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Let Not Your Hart

1/26/2014

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Title: Let Not Your Hart

Author: James Seay

Publication Date: 1970

How I Heard About It: Bookstore Browsing


  All writers have, or will tell you they have, a conversion narrative like this: a small independent bookstore, an afternoon of mindless browsing, the welcome discovery of a great book. Mine is no different really, and perhaps even a bit more cliché. The bookstore was Square Books in Oxford, the book was a yellowed paperback lightly imprinted with a bottle ring, and its author was the kind of Southern poet too many male poets born in the South want, at least at some point, to be. Including me.

            Let Not Your Hart by James Seay looked just like a book from the 60’s should look, with its sepia-colored cover and Warhol-like illustration of a (VW?) bus. And hell, the book even smelled like an old poem should. But that wasn’t why I bought it. Three other reasons: it was dedicated to Lee, which is my wife’s name; it was a first book; and, most importantly, I liked the first stanza of the first poem, which was about fishing, a subject I was trying to write about in my own scribblings. 

            I admit that I am a sucker for fishing poems, with their natural, if obvious, metaphorical resonance. But here was a fishing poem, “Grabbling in Yokna Bottom” about a different kind of fishing—catfish noodling—which was enjoying, in the cult documentary Okie Noodling and in the television series Hillbilly Handfishin’ and Mudcat, a popular resurgence in American culture forty years after the publication of this book.

            The subject matter was all well and good, but it was language and form that made the poem distinctive.

            The hungry come in a dry time
            To muddy the water of this swamp river
            And take in nets what fish or eel
            Break surface to suck at this world’s air.

The spondee that opens the fourth line enacts perfectly what the poem is saying, what it describes—that is, the words themselves break the surface of the line, the same way the spondaic “Rough winds” blow into the fourth line of Shakespeare’s famous 18th sonnet.

            I only get this technical because conscientious spondaic line-openings are a hallmark of Seay’s style, in the way they are for many great poets—Sidney, Shelley, Hopkins, et al. This was a poet, I realized, who was paying attention to form and therefore couldn’t be idly charged with only being a “Southern poet.” (This charge always has imbedded in it condescension: the belief that Southern poets favor, or rely on, subject matter more than form).

            I read through the book, and I loved its intensity of language and content. Here are poems that aren’t shying away from the world and the materials of what some might call “the masculine South”—hunting and fishing and manual labor and football and moonshine (not to mention characters with names like Speedo, Punk Kincaid, Champ, Sam Boy, etc.)—but they confront these subjects without nostalgia or sentimentality.

Take, for instance, the fifth poem in the collection, “Turtles from the Sea.” It is a poem, no doubt, that will make many readers cringe—especially readers who have already cringed at a term like the “masculine South”—but you can’t deny its honest depiction of illegal turtle hunting and the strange, beautiful way the guilt takes hold in the last two stanzas. And I think it took me a second reading before I heard it for what it was: a ballad.

            Cast-off vital parts grew black, then green,
            And simmered in the Florida heat.
            Buzzards circled, swooped, and took what parts
            The dogs or wildcats would not eat.

            Fang and beak devoured my flesh each night
            Until the Cuban workers came,
            Turned the spoil of rent and rotted heart
            Onto the newly planted sugar cane.

           
In the bookstore I asked my Mississippi poet-friend, who was playing the part of Virgilian guide in his native state: Who is this guy?

            Or was, as it turned out to be. James Seay shot himself sometime in the 70’s or 80’s, my friend told me. I bought the book immediately, half-anticipating this essay—here was a gem of a poet needing to be resuscitated. Someone who was too good to lie unnoticed in the vaults of time.

Or is, as it turns out to be. James Seay didn’t shoot himself. He’s been teaching for forty years at UNC-Chapel Hill, and I am guilty of being a dilettante for not knowing his work. And where did my friend get that rumor? And the ability to say it so casually?

 But I have only been able to unearth two essays about him, and only two interviews. An online bibliography brings up a picture of the man—shaggy-haired and one-eyed. Yep, a poet with an eye-patch.

And so the emphasis in his poems on vision. In the poem “Options,” a doctor offers the speaker a choice of replacement glass eyes. The poem is one of anger, the hardest tone to control:

            Not for all the purple velvet
            That could be cut to lay them on
            Was there an option
            Able to resplit my sight

            …

            He tried, eye after eye;
            They lay like bogus coins
            In my forehead

This is good, especially in the way the rhythm works against the anger, but I like the subtle anger even better in another poem, “Were You Wise, Awake?”

            Your conch beside the fire
            Sings it desire, yet sings no such fury
            As the quickened one
            In the moon’s half-light or in the torn eye of the sun
            Beneath the turning sea.

Here the anger gets transferred onto the natural imagery, which is lovely. And though I hate to speculate on such matters, I wonder: would his poetry have been as good without the missing eye? That is, I think his vision of the world is made stranger thereby. As when he notices that an old governor (the machine, not the political figure) “lies like a broken animal, / the needles of its red eyes / fixed steady on the sea-shell road.” Or, in “The Starlings,” that the tile birds “peck / at crumbs, hard and stale as cinder rocks, / on the snow beneath the Kotex box.”

            Let Not Your Hart contains some bad poems too, as expected of any collection and especially a first. Sometimes his staccato rhythm and inverted syntax sound stilted. But the book also contains many great poems—poems that linger in the mind well after their reading—such as my favorite fishing poem in the book, “Others of Rainbow Colors”:

            The taloned hooks were mullet-baited
                        And dropped into the glacial
            Brilliance where old night awaited
                        New day in waters crystal-
            Green beneath out whiteflashing bow.
                        Spiraling up it came in troll
            Toward our knifenosed prow,
                        Had taken the mullet whole
            And came as a gift, however dumb
                                    Or knowing,
                        From the seawomb.
                                    But following
                        Its invisible helix came others
                                    Of rainbow colors,
            Free, yet caught in all the prisms of the sea.


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My People's Waltz

12/2/2013

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Title: My People's Waltz

Author: Dale Ray Phillips

Publication Date: 1996

How I Heard About It: Oxford American article

            I read all of My People’s Waltz out loud to myself. Yep, that’s right. All 190 pages. It was, I guess you could say, a long and lonely November, and sometimes I needed a human voice in my apartment other than the talk show hosts of public radio. But there were other reasons.

             From the very first sentence—“My grandfather kept his floozy in a silver Airstream above the bend in the river where the dead crossed over”—I knew these were sentences that demanded to be read aloud. Indeed, I will stick my neck out and holler that there is not one sentence in this book, not one, that isn’t a gemstone of a sentence. To prove my point, let me open the book at random, slam my finger on the page, and quote: “A few customers on the end of the route were eating at their picnic tables to escape the kitchen’s heat, and I fought the crazy urge to introduce myself as someone who had decided to join their family.”

            Yes. Yes, indeed.

            If I never read another book out loud again from cover to cover, I’m okay with that, for this was the book to do so.

            I’m sure by now you can tell that I am a hyperbolic man, and I also know that nothing could be more cliché and critically unsound than to say, “This is the best book I have ever read in my life.” But what do you do when you feel this statement to be so true—that this book speaks to you, and almost you alone—and there are no other words that come to you except, “This is the best book I have ever read in my life”?

            This is not to say, by the way, that this is the best book you will ever read in your life. And it’s entirely possible that I feel this way in the same way I feel about Shakespeare’s plays. (That is, whenever anyone asks me which Shakespeare play I like best, I reply: “The one I just read.”)

            My People’s Waltz is, perhaps for lack of a better term, a novel-in-stories, with a single protagonist-narrator named Richard, and each story chronicles a liminal moment in his life—the death of his grandfather, his loss of virginity, his break-up with his high school girlfriend, his marriage, his divorce, the raising of his son. Indeed, it occurred to me that the genre itself—a novel-in-stories (and particularly this novel-in-stories)—makes the greatest use of Aristotle’s notion about the difference between epic and dramatic time.[1]

            But to reduce these stories to bullet-like points is to strip them of their multidimensionality. In the first story, “Why I’m Talking,” the grandfather’s sudden heart attack is only one event in a maelstrom of intoxicating plot points, which include a young boy (Richard) refusing to talk, his mother off in the mental ward, his father out on the road as a half-ass salesman, and his grandfather’s biracial paramour letting the young boy cop a feel. And even the grandfather’s death is not the climax (not even when, in a strangely moving moment, young Richard kisses his dead grandfather’s tongue). The climax, I would argue, occurs at the end, when his mother is frantically asking Richard about what happened, and he speaks for the first time:

            I understood that although this periodic leave-taking had already become a part of  our lives, we had somehow become a family, caught in the awkwardness of shaping our first reunion together. Some chimeras would have to be constructed to keep this   good feeling alive, and so I answered her with this voice, which love had taught to deceive.

            You’ll notice that he doesn’t really speak—the dialogue is indirect and summarized—but the voice is the same one that goes on to tell us all of the tragicomic stories that follow. It is a voice with a hypnotic rhythm—most of these sentences are around thirty syllables—and that expresses a childlike wonder, a simplicity that captures beautiful awe.

            Let me provide some examples.

            Upon seeing the birth of his child: “If there is a lesson to be learned from witnessing birth, then it is that all things are urged ungently into being.”

            Upon recognizing the relationship with his high school girlfriend will not last: “I marveled at the newly discovered place in myself which could make love on a widow’s walk to someone I loved but would leave because a greedy part of myself wanted more.”

            Or when he takes a break to hustle people in a savings-and-loan scandal in Florida: “The Gulf Coast was like that—full of people whose luck had tricked them into risking anything in order to rediscover what they had lost.”

            These aren’t pretentious declarations. They are the straightforward declarations of the heart, and I only quote the smallest fraction of them, though I could go on all day.  

            But there are writers who write great sentence without the sentences amounting to anything like a story. This book, though, is at its very essence a love story. Certainly not a romanticized love story, but a true one—about love’s anxieties and troubles.

            For just as in Shakespeare, marriages are things of trouble[2]. Richard’s parents have a tragic marriage—the mother takes up boyfriends from time to time, the father remains desperately in love—and the tragedy extends through Richard’s own marriage to Lisa. (That’s part of the tragedy, I think—the stories seem to suggest that we can never, no matter how much we want to, escape from our parents.) Dale Ray Phillips captures marital tension in wonderfully subtle dialogue—the kind of dialogue they’re always trying to teach you about in creative writing classes.

            The title of the book comes, of course, from the Roethke poem that everyone always debates: Is the father abusive in the poem, or is he lovably drunk? Or both?

            The ambiguity is essential to the poem, as it is to this book. Everywhere in this book there are people dancing—usually sad drunks twirling and spinning and somehow both utterly alone and part of community of sad drunks twirling and spinning and trying desperately to make sense of their hard lives.  There is such sadness in these stories, but it is a deep sadness that the beauty heightens, confirming Shelley: “Our saddest songs tell our sweetest thoughts.”

            Dale Ray Phillips, for all I know, is something like the Harper Lee of his generation. He hasn’t published another book in the fifteen years since My People’s Waltz, and it’s not hard for me to understand. This book must have taken nearly everything he had to write—pain and love and hard work—and it remains to me the essence of the anxiety of influence. After reading the book, that is, my writing seemed much more frivolous and inconsequential thereby.

            Fifteen years ago, however, it was not obscure; in fact, the book was nominated for the Pulitzer. But fifteen years is a long time in today’s world, and not many of my friends or colleagues have heard about it.

            This book, sadly, needs more than whatever simple, humble resuscitation this blog post can offer. This book needs to be remembered as it is—a classic of Southern literature. Or, even better, the truest love story I have ever read, in silence or aloud.  

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[1] I explain this difference to my students like this: Say you’re watching a blockbuster action film like The Fast and the Furious. Epic time is all of the time the main character, played by Vin Diesel, presumably must go through—sleeping, brushing his teeth, going to the bathroom, etc. etc. But how boring would an action film be if the director showed us this? (Andy Warhol once made an 8 hour film of his lover sleeping—blah.) Instead, we see dramatic time—the events that matter to the story—the hijacking and car chases, etc. etc.

[2] Weird exceptions: the Macbeths, Gertrude and Claudius


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Deadwood

10/30/2013

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In the past decade an interesting trend has developed among television audiences—a result, surely, of many cultural and technological factors, but most of all streaming and recording services like Netflix and TiVo.

            I refer, of course, to The Binge.

            You can characterize The Binge in two simple ways: one, you watch every episode of every season, in order; two, you do not take the traditional week’s timeout delay between shows (in fact, you often find yourself watching five or six hours in a row during The Binge).

            People are making careers out of debating the negative and positive aspects of The Binge. Some argue that narrative art ought to be serialized (cf. Dickens publishing episodically in Master Humphrey’s Clock and Household Words in the 1840’s and 50’s); others argue that sitting down and concentrating on a TV series is like sitting down and concentrating on a novel (cf. Dickens ever since). 

            Out of the seven shows I’ve binged on, only one was not an HBO show--Breaking Bad. I seem to subscribe wholeheartedly to the network’s slogan—“It’s not TV. It’s HBO.” Better yet, I think it should go something like this: “It’s not TV. It’s art.”

            For the past two months I have lived without internet or television in Tennessee, and this lack of distraction was beginning, well, to distract me. So I rented all three seasons of Deadwood and began The Binge by watching them on my laptop in a week’s time.

            Now, I realize my initial aim was only to include reviews of underappreciated works of art on this blog but that I am already making an exception. (“Do I contradict myself?” Whitman writes. “Very well, I am large. I contain multitudes.”)

            For one thing, it’s not that Deadwood is necessarily underappreciated. The HBO show won 8 Emmys and a Golden Globe, and critics reviewed it favorably during its run from 2004-2006.

            But when you stack it up against other HBO masterpieces (and, not coincidentally, the four other shows I’ve binged on)--The Sopranos (six seasons; 86 episodes), The Wire (five seasons; 60 episodes), Six Feet Under (five seasons; 63 episodes), Game of Thrones (three seasons and counting; 30 episodes and counting)—you see that its run was short-lived. (And among a small, informal survey of my friends, only a few have seen it.)

            I’m sort of surprised I liked it, as the Old West has never been my favorite subject. But this show, with its blend of historical and fictional characters, amply investigates the exploits of late nineteenth-century capitalism and the manifestations of post-Civil war violence (as seen, most notably, in the cowboy). And a good HBO series, whatever its setting, is like a Russian novel, in which plot points connect over vast swatches of time.

            But it’s not Dostoyevsky or Tolstoy that critics compare regularly to Deadwood. It’s Shakespeare. Consider The AFI awards, in a nomination: “Deadwood is a Shakespearean epic in spurs.” And again, the following year: “Grand schemes and Shakespearean motives take viewers on a true journey through time...”

            The reason I’ve been living in Tennessee (again, not coincidentally) is to teach Shakespeare, so the connection wouldn’t otherwise be lost on me. And I think it’s fair. We have characters with Macbeth-like ambition. Drunks in the vein of Falstaff and Sir Toby Belch. Buffoons worthy of Dogberry. Jealousies à la Othello.

            But I think the fairest comparisons are in the language, for Deadwood, as most critics have rightly agreed, is all about the language, which is, by turns, eloquent, vulgar, purplish, muscular, Victorian, American, and vulgar again.[1] The primary modes are the hornswoggle and the insult.

            Consider a few lines, taken nearly at random.

            From E.B. Farnum, de facto mayor and hotelier, who basically says here that he needs to fart: “Allow me a moment's silence Mr Hearst, sir, I'm having a digestive crisis and must focus on repressing it's expression.”

            But the most dramatic Shakespearean linguistic conceit that the show revives is the soliloquy. It’s hard to dramatize the soliloquy in the 21st century—voiceovers seem cheap—but here we have a gold miner who talks to his dog; a famous cowgirl, Calamity Jane, mumbling at Wild Bill Hicock’s grave; a drunk livery operator who talks dirty to a horse; a loveably buffoonish hotelier who speaks the show’s most eloquent monologues to a dumb lackey; and, most significantly, the show’s tragic villain-hero, the saloon owner Al Swearengen, rhapsodizing and confessing and scheming while one of his prostitutes goes down on him. (Or, at other times, when he talks to a decapitated Indian head.)

            Indeed, it is Ian McShane’s performance that shines brightest in a superbly-acted show. Apparently, his Swearengen landed at #6 on TV’s Guide’s “Nastiest TV Villains of All-Time,” though he becomes a villain, like Tony Soprano, whom your learn to love. That is, his villainy begins to pale in comparison to a set of increasingly nasty characters that infiltrate the town of Deadwood: a rival pimp, Cy Tolliver; a murderously misogynistic geologist, Frances Wolcott; and the monomaniacal gold magnate George Hearst.

            The worst actor, in my opinion, is the show’s other protagonist, its good guy—Sheriff Seth Bullock, played by the handsome actor Timothy Oliphant, whose one expression seems to be the scowl (that I thought always seemed, oddly enough, to border on a laugh).  I get the point: the sheriff is a man with principles, easily given to anger, etc. etc. But Oliphant didn’t seem to have the range of emotion, even the subtle range of emotion within anger, that the other actors had.

            Still, Deadwood will go down as one of my all-time favorite shows. I ended The Binge as always: craving more, feeling like I'd lost a friend, having the lingering sense that there is more to be told.

            So that may be the worst thing HBO has ever done[2]: cancelling too soon a show that now lives in the annals of undervalue.

                                                                            --Hastings Hensel

[1] Much has been made of the vulgarity, but I’ve also never seen a show in which they drink so much whiskey and yet never really seem drunk. They take more shots in one episode than in all eleven seasons of Cheers!

[2] Perhaps with the exception of Arli$$


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Stoner

10/24/2013

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Title: Stoner

Author: John Williams

Publication Date: 1965

How I Heard About It:
Recommended by a friend

            Ah, the English Professor, that perennial subject of the biopic, stumbling cliché of alcoholism and existential emptiness, too self-conscious for his (rarely her) own good. You have probably seen them: Wonder Boys, The Squid and the Whale, A Single Man, Smart People, etc. etc.

            It’s not that these portrayals are necessarily false. It’s that most of them (but not all) are lousy films.

            John Williams’ 1965 novel, Stoner, is about an English professor who is not an alcoholic. Nor is he, as one might believe the title to imply, a pot-smoker. His name is William Stoner, and this quietly beautiful novel chronicles his career at the University of Missouri in the first half of the twentieth century.

            We learn on the first page, in a remarkably bleak sentence, the tragic fate of our title character:

            Stoner’s colleagues, who held him in no particular esteem when he was alive, speak of him rarely now; to the older ones, his name is a reminder of the end that awaits them all, and to the younger ones it is merely a sound which evokes no sense of the past and no identity with which they can associate themselves or their careers.

            The nod here, I think, is to another chilling portrait of human isolation—Tolstoy’s The Death of Ivan Ilych, which contains this more blatantly ironic passage on its first page:

            So on receiving the news of Ivan Ilych's  death the first thought of each of the gentlemen in that private  room was of the changes and promotions it might occasion among  themselves or their acquaintances.

            This kind of announcement relieves us of surprise. It’s not if our character dies. Only when. And thus what emerges between the casual mention of Stoner’s death at the beginning of the novel, and the haunting and intricate details of his death at the end, is the embodiment of what Arthur Miller called “Tragedy and the Common Man.”

            For William Stoner’s life is nothing if not a series of disappointments. Remarkably, though, he does not emerge as a pathetic character in the way that, say, Willy Loman does.

            Partly this has to do with the calmness and clarity of Williams’ prose—what you might say is its iciness, and thereby its incisiveness—and the way that his prose mirrors Stoner’s demeanor. Stoner is not hyperactive or manic like Willy Loman. His problems are serious, to be sure, but he confronts them with a clear control of emotion. And thus Williams charges the atmosphere with awkwardness and tension.

            Take, for instance, Stoner’s decision, against the wishes of his humbly rural parents, to study literature rather than agriculture. But he does not tell them until they make the long trek to Columbia for his graduation:

            They were alone in the kitchen…But neither then nor after his parents had finished breakfast could he bring himself to tell them of his change of plans, of his decision not to return to the farm. Once or twice he started to speak; then he looked at the brown faces that rose nakedly out of their new clothing, and thought of the long journey they had made and of the years they had awaited his return. He sat stiffly with them until they finished and came into the kitchen. Then he told them that he had to go early to the University and that he would see them there later in the day, at his exercises.

He cannot here, as elsewhere, bring himself to speak his mind. Indeed, this is often a novel of long silences. Not until halfway through, during the first of Stoner’s academic scandals, do we get any detailed discussion of literature.

            Instead, the novel traces Stoner’s increasing detachment from the big things in life: his marriage, his family, his career, his search for meaning.

            Williams reserves the novel’s most stinging portrait for Stoner’s wife, Edith, who must surely be among the coldest bitches in all of literature. Though her bitchiness, at times, seems a bit one-dimensional (there really isn’t any gray area with her), at least you can say this about it: it is absolutely relentless.

            Even on their honeymoon you can predict their unhappy destiny:

          When he returned, Edith was in bed with the covers pulled to her chin, her face turned upward, her eyes closed, a thin frown creasing her forehead. Silently, as if she were asleep, Stoner undressed and got into bed beside her. For several moments he lay with his desire, which had become an impersonal thing, belonging to himself alone. He spoke to Edith, as if to find a haven for what he felt; she did not answer. He moved his hand upon her; she did not stir; her frown deepened. Again he spoke, saying her name to silence.

The silences here are Edith’s, not Stoner’s, and they contrast with her nearly manic, though honest, remark at his deathbed. She says to one of Stoner’s dean, his only friend Gordon Finch (and not to Stoner; no, never directly to Stoner): “‘He looks awful. Poor Willy. He won’t be with us much longer.’”

            Small wonder Stoner never turned to alcohol after all. What he turns to instead is his work, and John Williams has been quoted as saying, “The important thing to me is Stoner’s sense of a job.” As Edith takes an extended vacation in St. Louis after her father’s suicide, Stoner realizes his marriage is a failure but that his

            love of literature, of language, of the mystery of the mind and heart showing themselves in the minute, strange, and unexpected combinations of letters and words, in the blackest and coldest print—the love which he had hidden as if it were illicit and dangerous, he began to display, tentatively at first, and then boldly, and then proudly.

            But disillusionment, as it tends to do, grows. Edith plays mind games with their daughter, Grace, and turns her quietly against him. An annoying and incompetent graduate student receives an F in one of Stoner’s classes, sides with the incoming department chair, and hinders Stoner’s career.

            And like all serious writers and scholars, Stoner begins to doubt his vocation. And the doubt, by turns, hardens and softens him. Picture him with the Buddha’s half-smile in the following lines, which characterize despair quite beautifully:

            He took a grim and ironic pleasure from the possibility that what little learning he had managed to acquire had led him to this knowledge: that in the long run of all things, even the learning that let him know this, were futile and empty, and ta last diminished into a nothingness they did not alter.

            But then, like a false spring, Stoner falls for a younger instructor named Katherine Driscoll, and we never doubt for a moment that they are in pure, true love. They read together, make love often, even vacation in a cabin during one chilly winter break. And here, too, Stoner has an epiphany about love that becomes itself a kind of love poem, and that needs to be quoted in its entirety:

            In his extreme youth Stoner had thought of love as an absolute state of being to which, if one were lucky, one might find access; in his maturity he had decided it was the heaven of a false religion, toward which one ought to gaze with an amused disbelief, a gently familiar contempt, and an embarrassed nostalgia. Now in his middle age he began to know that it was neither a state of grace nor an illusion; he saw it as a human act of becoming, a condition that was invented and modified moment by moment and day by day, by the will and the intelligence of the heart.

Needless to say, this is beautiful prose. But by now—on page 195 of a 278-page novel—we know the outcome. Stoner’s rival colleague, Hollis Lomax (another one-dimensional character, and a categorically imperative asshole) sees to it that their love affair ends.

            Stoner grows even more disillusioned and then, years later but seemingly as a result of Katherine’s absence, fatally ill. And if you think I have spoiled the ending, then this novel is not for you. One comes to this novel not for its plot but for its beautiful prose and its quiet passages of stoic solitude.  And nowhere is Williams better than in describing Stoner’s last moments on earth, in its illuminated details—“The sky outside, the deep blue-black space, and the thin glow of moonlight through a cloud,” “the distant sound of laughter,” “the sweet odors of grass and lead and flower”—and in which Stoner picks up one of his old books:

            It hardly mattered to him that the book was forgotten and that it served no use; and the question of its worth  at any time seemed almost trivial. He did not have the illusion that he would find himself there, in the fading print; and yet, he knew, a small part of him that he could not deny was there, and would be there.

            One can’t help but wonder, especially if one is in the profession, whether or not Stoner’s story is the story of all English professors or writers. But it is not. No more than any of the lousy movies about English professors are. This is a story, in the end, about all of us.

           

           


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